Saturday, May 29, 2010

Forgotten dreams or so it seems, your memories are fading.

She chose a winter night,
to lie her body on the road,
The darkness
disguised her.
The headlights wouldn't reveal her,
until it was much too late.
The sound of rain,
filled her ears.
She wouldn't have to hear
the sound of the
screeching tyres.
The cold and the darkness
turned her body numb.
She didn't feel
the tyres
imprint
her body
forever.


xoxo Camelgirl

7 comments:

  1. this was chillingly beautiful from begining to end. i love it (and the gorgeous photos):)

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  2. ummm yeah, i want to cry. that was good.
    Cat xx

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  3. I've read this over about five times and i cant stop. I think i want to cry too.

    xo

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  4. Brave enough to enter what? Is all I ask,

    But I just want to say you're such a lovely (and I don't mean it in the that other bloggers over use it, I mean it in all honesty) writer. Or poetic, or well bloggger.
    What ever you consider yourself. You're extremely extraordinary. See that word isn't used enough.

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  5. that's really sad. :( and freaky. X)
    but wonderful nonetheless.
    ~Abby~

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  6. Oh, wow. That's so sad, yet peaceful.

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  7. This left me chilling. It's so sad.

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